I had many issues with the first
book as depicted in my review. However, I as I stated before, I am interested
in what makes a story popular. The second book is as equally poorly written. The
characters are flat. The story line is predictable and boring. The dialogue is
repetitive and nauseating. The author tries to use big words. Sadly it is
apparent that she is overusing the thesaurus tool to find a more attractive
word. Here is a sample, minus the sex of what you are in for if you pick up
this book:
“I
love you Christian,” whispered Anna.
“You
are mine, Christian growled.
“I
will always be yours and you are mine.”
“Yours,” he responds with a smile. “I cannot resist you,
Anastasia. You have bewitched me.”
“It is you Christian that have put a spell on me.”
“I will die a thousand deaths if you ever leave me. I could
not tolerate the world without you, my beautiful Anastasia. I
love you.”
“Christian, I could never leave you. You are mine forever.”
Yuck,
yuck, yuck! This scenario has been repeated more then a dozen times! The
immaturity of this fictitious couple is annoying. I hate to think that college
age girls would strive for this type of relationship. Again, besides the
descriptions of sex, I have no clue why these books are so appealing.
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